Tuesday, 25 February 2014

Strength and Resilience!

As some of you may know, our next project is on strength and resilience.

Definition of “resilient”: Strong, resistant, quick to recover, spirited, determined or flexible.

What is Resilience?


  • Resilience is the ability to adapt to adversity, to roll with the punches and cope with life’s misfortunes and setbacks.
  • Resilience will help you survive challenges and even thrive in the midst of hardship. It can help you endure loss, chronic stress, traumatic events and other challenges both big and small.
  • Resilience won’t make your problems go away, but resilience can give you the ability to see past them, find enjoyment in life and handle stress better.
  • Resilience is developing “Internal Resources” (skills and coping mechanisms to improve your mental well-being) that you can draw on throughout life’s ups and downs.
  • Becoming more resilient takes time, practice, experience and often guidance from others.
  • Resilience doesn’t mean you ignore your feelings. When adversity strikes, you still experience anger, grief or pain, but you’re able to go on and remain generally optimistic and go on with your life.
  • Being resilient also doesn’t have to mean going it alone. In fact, being able to reach out to others for support is a key component of being resilient.

As you watch the film and read the stories introducing you to this topic, please consider:


  • What struck you about the stories of resilience you saw or heard about?
  • What challenge did the people/person face and how did they overcome this challenge?
  • How did overcoming this struggle help make the people/person stronger?
  • What characteristics helped make the people/person resilient?






Much of this project has been adapted for our community from a Resilience Cafe on bie.org.

Tuesday, 18 February 2014

Contact Sheet for Grade 3 Art

Please look at the contact sheet for the grade 3 art.

Contact Sheet Link

Tuesday 

Complete a storyboard for your book. The starred areas need to be complete. You do not have to copy out the full text for each square. You have two choices:

  1. You print off your story. Using 2+ different colours, alternate underlining what goes on each page.
  2. Make a copy of your story in your assignment folder. Divide up using enter to show what is on each page. Print this out and hand it in with your storyboard.


Your pictures in your storyboard should show a rough idea of what will be in each picture. Please write the number of the image you want to use in the text box area.

This should be done for homework if not finished in class.

Here is a good website telling you how to select an image in GIMP

http://www.gimp.org/tutorials/Changing_Background_Color_2/

Wednesday, 5 February 2014

Quotation Marks Handout and Poster

Check this out for details on quotation marks: http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/how-to-use-quotation-marks



Updates On What We Are Doing

I figured I would write an update post so that if you or your parents want a refresher of what we are doing in class you can check here.

We have been using Trello.com to monitor where we are in the short story editing process. Students should be done a rough copy, given themselves a mark on the rubric, and working on fixing at least one area from the rubric to move it up on the scale. This should be done by Thursday. 

Next Steps

Thursday, 23 January 2014

Rubric for Short Story


Short Story Writing
Excellent
Very Good
Satisfactory
Min Acceptable
Details and Description
      Use good detail and description throughout the story that also develops themes and mood
      Give good detail and description to develop setting, characters, events and images
      Give some detail and description to develop characters, events, and images
      Contains limited detail and images
Word choice and sentence structure
      Show variety and precision in word choice and use a variety of sentence types and lengths effectively
      Use a variety of words and sentences but more complex sentences may be awkward
      Incorporate some variety in words and sentences but some sentences are short and choppy or long and awkward
      Uses basic language with many errors
Story Structure
      Build a story through believable events that are generally not predictable
      Create a climax with audience impact
      Create an emotional impact on the audience or makes a strong point

      Build the story on believable events with some sense of uncertainty
      Develop a clear climax with some build up and impact
      Engage the audience with the beginning and create a believable ending
      Build the story on a series of predictable events
      Develop a basic climax 
      Establish the problem or situation and introduce main character(s) in the beginning
      Ending is abrupt, seems forced or unlikely
      Contains a beginning, middle, and end
Characterization
      Create characters who reveal motivations and relationships
      Develop characters through their words and behavior
      Describe characters in a way that focuses on physical traits or stereotypes
      Characters have little description or depth
Dialogue
·         Use natural and interesting dialogue
·         Use natural dialogue

      Use dialogue but may be overused, underused, confusing, or forced
·         Dialogue is present but weak
Devices
·         Use 5 or more devices in creative and appropriate ways
·         Use 4 or more devices in some creative and appropriate ways
·         Use 3 of the devices
·         Uses 1 or 2 devices

Short Story Elements

These are the short story elements we will use in our stories.

Literary Devices

Alliteration: the repetition of the same sound at the start of several words. For example, “my mother makes marvelous muffins.”

Imagery: descriptive language involving multiple senses to make a word picture. For example, “The sharp crack of the frost shattered the inky night air.”

Irony: when a statement or situation means something different from (or even opposite of) what is expected.

Metaphor: an implied comparison of two things that are not alike. The comparison suggests that they do share a common quality. For example, “Her words were a knife to my heart.”

Mood: The feeling that the author wants the reader to have.

Onomatopoeia: words that imitate sounds. For example, Bang!

Oxymoron: a device that combines contradictory words for dramatic effect, for example, jumbo shrimp.

Personification: When objects, ideas, or animals are given human qualities. For example, “The sun smiled down on me.”

Simile: A direct comparison between unlike things using the word “like” or “as” to connect them. For example, “Potatoes are like apples of the earth.”

Stereotypes: an oversimplified picture, usually of a group of people, giving them all a set of characteristics, without consideration of individual differences.

Tone: The writer’s attitude towards the subject or the audience.



Monday, 6 January 2014

Summary of Today's Discussion

Today we looked at two recent rants from Rick Mercer and discussed the techniques we saw with presentation style and camera work. We also watched our own rants and discussed what we like and what we could work on.

Here are the things we noticed in Rick's Rants


  • consistent eye contact
  • good expression in voice with dramatic pauses and emotion
  • uses hand gestures to emphasize points
  • the rant is memorized
  • He walks around as he talks
  • set in an interesting background
  • He emphasizes main points and arguments when he stops walking suddenly 
  • He ends with a strong sentence that is thought-provoking or a call for action
  • the camera follows Rick from a constant distance of about a meter
  • we see his upper body from a fairly consistent level of zoom
  • both Rick and the camera walk at the same pace and with confidence
  • the camera is generally at an angle
  • the camera sharply goes to a 45' angle at the start of a point or to emphasize and then slowly rights itself
  • A sharp camera angle often corresponds with Rick stopping walking to emphasize a point. 

Some of the things we liked in student rants

  • we had confident speakers
  • our speakers knew their information
  • our speakers stayed focused during distractions
  • people often made good eye contact
  • we appreciated speakers who seemed to care about their topic
  • we like when rants end with a strong sentence or call to action
  • we like when the speaker's voice was loud and clear
  • we prefer when the speaker is the centre of focus (there is no background silliness)
  • The camera used interesting angles
  • there were interesting settings

Some things we wanted to work on 

  • memorizing more of our speeches
  • maintaining more eye contact
  • keeping focus
  • pausing between points 
  • emphasizing important sentences
  • using more expression
  • making sure the development of our argument is clear to all viewers